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05-27-2005, 04:43 PM
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Chapter 2-On Oddworld

I slowly opened my eyes.
At first glance, I knew that I wasn't in Phoenix anymore.
"Welcome to Oddworld." Said the cloaked man.
I slowly fell to the ground and buried my face in my hands.
"What have you done! What have you done!" I yelled.
"You said this is what you wanted." Replied the man.
"Must...go..back." I wheeped.
"Well, um, we can't." Said the man.
"What do you mean?"
"When a human arrives on Oddworld, for some odd reason, it can't go back on Earth. Maybe I should have told you that before I let you-"
But before he could finish his reply, I fell to the ground in tear.
The man seemed to be carrying a whip, so he whipped me on the back.
"GET A HOLD OF YOURSELF!!!!" He yelled.
I got up all shaky and slow.
"You're a big crybaby, boy!" He yelled.
"I AM NOT A CRYBABY!" I yelled. Then I punched him.
I ran off into a forest.
"Mom? Dad? Where are you guys!?!" I hollered.
Suddenly, a slig went up to me.
"HALT!" It said.
Luckily, I didn't see him. Instead, I trampled over him.
I went deeper in the forest, hoping to find a way out of Oddworld.
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