thread: Mullocks Return
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05-24-2005, 05:01 PM
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Umm...that chapter was a bit disturbing....but in a funny way! Overall it was good, but there is a teensy problem with this:
“Well sometimes at midnight I wake up screaming for I always dream about Abe and Skillya having sex on the beach and I get very disturbed”
Abe doesn't exactly have sexual organs, so I don't think he can....urm....yeah. :/ Anyway, keep the story going.
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