wow this story rox! maybe the grammar needs ta be more correct, but otherless yer story's good...
i liked the part in the end of the story '
(The sligs send over the medic, get their chocolate cake and leave for Rupture Farms.
“Fred was there any point in that?” asked a slig. “What are you going to tell Molluck?”
“I don’t know” said Fred. “At least we got cake.” )
i found that really funny! keep going with the story!