I got some nice reply's of my fanfic,a few threw my personnal messidges so it gous further from here.
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Chapter 1:Heavy metal(part 3)
The stranger walks through a long hallway and soon find's himself in a deep darkness.Day'me....its dark 'n here.
Cant see a thang 'n heeEEEEEEE!!!!!,and stranger fall's into somesort of pit.
-EEEEEERRRrrrre and stranger hit's the ground with a loud SMACK!
Stranger stands up and has an expression like a sleg on his face.
That was complet'ly wacked,stranger complains.'Least this place is decently lighted.Stranger walk's further into the cave like area wich seems to look like an old mining tunnel.Wére the hell am i?This aint lookin like a place build by them day'me clakkz,Stranger saids to himself.
After sometimes stranger has a look at the rocky wall's around him and discovers rock painting's.Lemme see here,stranger saids when he looks at the painting's.The paintings look like frog creatures aboufe something that looks like a drained river.A squid like creature with red eyes is looking down at them while around the rock painting are things that looks like the frog creatures but dead,while creatures holding things that look like guns are standing on-top and around the corpses.
This prob'bly some paintin's done by the native's in these part's.As the stranger walk's further he see's light at the end of the tunnel.
But he find's something alot differant then an opple farm.Everywhere water storage silo's that suck water from the river that come's out of the cave.
A number of brewing machines and machines that push juice out of opple's
and outlaw's as far as your eye's reach and maybe further.
Suddonly stranger hear's a metalic,bouldering foice through the intercom.
'ALRIGHT YOU SLUGZ.I GOT WORD OF A BOUNTEY HUNTER COMING TOWARD'S US USING THE SECRIT UNDERGROUND TUNNEL.IF YA'LL SEE ANYONE THAT AINT BELONG 'ERE,BLOW ES HEAD OF OR POUND EM OR WHAT'EFFA YA WANNA DO WITH EM.....'
That sounded like cybernetix.But were is that walkin' toaster,stranger saids to himself.Stranger sneak's through the facility and hide's in the bushe's to prevent detection.He hide's in the bushe's and draw's alot of outlaw's at him using chippunk's.Why these dumbasse's alway goin after these punk's?
Dont they think it's strange there budd's aint comeing back?Stranger wonder's
Aint inportant,as long as these here outlawz are worth a decent amount a' moolah.Stranger walk's further and reache's one of the brewery silo's and wonder's what there brewing.He climb's up a ladder and has a look see at the stranger liquid in the tank.Wha is this stuff?It aint soulstorm brew couse this stuff is yellow,brownish.HEY WADDA YA DOIN THERE!Stranger hears behind him.Its an outlaw cutter and he run's toward's stranger ready to 'cut' him.
I wus just lookin' at the fine construction,stranger reply'es while he dodges the cutter and give's him a smack down.He suck's him up and bounty's em alive.Hey *hik* wawuz that? *hik*As a outlaw gunner said's when he walk's to stranger.Eyyyyy that aint you george*hik*
Stranger looks at the outlaw and saids:this guy look drunk.Maybe ya wanna drink so'more and stranger throw's the drunken outlaw in the silo.But instead of drowning the outlaw drinks half of the brew or whatever it is and now stands in a small puddle of liquid.Hahahaha....*hik*ya cant kill m....m.....me....
And the outlaw suddenly start's barfing.What tha hell is he doin?And stranger jumps after the outlaw in the silo and now also stands in the small puddle.
Suddenly the outlawz skin become's more green then it already was an he get's spot's all over his face.And before stranger even know's whats up,the outlaw drops dead.Stranger bounty's him and then he hear's cybernetix saying something threw the intercom.'HEY,WHAT DID I TELL YA BOY'S ABOUT DRINKIN THE JUICE RIGHT OUTA THE SILO'S?1 OF THE SILO'S IS COMPLETELY DRAINED!'
'I WANT YA IDIOT'S TO CHECK OUT THE SILO AND GIVE STATUS REPORT'
Ooohh great,im scruwed now,stranger think's to himself and jump's outa the silo.He contineu's and try's to afoid the special patrol that's looking at the silo.Stranger gous further into the facility and shoots a few chippunk's(yes at the same time)at a spot,making a few go there.Hope ya like the smell stranger saids and shoot's a skunkbom at them and bounty's them while there pukkin' and gous further.He silently takes out the sniper's by shooting them down with zappfly and even get's a few mortar's alive.
He see's a few boombat's and load's a rock on his crossbow.These boy's are explosive so i betta aint scare em to much or they ganna go boom.
He shoots a rock right into a boombat's kisser and luckely he dousnt explode.
After knocking down a few more he run's to the boombat's and put's them in his ammo bag.He alks up to a wall with a hole in it and look's through it and see's a rather large outlaw and a few minion's watching TV.
You think the bounty hunter's close boy's?the large outlaw saids with the same metalic foice as through the intercom.We'll,we expect him to be 'ere soon boss,an outlaw mortar saids.
I hear he might be realy close.alot of the posted guard's are missing,a outlaw gunner saids.GGGRRRRR those idiot's probebly fell from a platform or in an opple juice machine,the large outlaw saids with a irritated foice.
Well i gues that could be but what if the bounty hunter IS here and they didnt get themself's killed,the gunner saids.
An ackward silence fall's and the large outlaw stand's up.You guy's probly right.Franky,go get my summer mask.Suddenly stranger get's shot in his back by a sniper dart.That's a cheap shot ya sucka,stranger saids to the sniper and charge's at the sniper,knock's him out and bounty's em.
But the outlaw wasnt without backup,stranger gets amboushed by alot of gunner's,automatic gunner's,sniper's and a few knife thrower's.
Good thing i got these here boombat's.He shoots a boombat at the gunner's and quickly bountey's them.Then he charge's at the knife thrower's knocking out a decent amount of them but getting some knife's thrown at him.
Quickly he put's stingbee's on his crossbow and kill's the remaining knife thrower's.Then he bounty's them and run's at the remaining gunner's and a few automatic machine gunner's.Stranger was doing well but he suddenly hear's something behind him.You enjoying ya self stranger?And while stranger try's to turn around he only see's a grey,metal fist hitting him right in the face,and a painfull blow hurl's him into a wall.Everything gous black and the last thing stranger hear's is a metalic yet diabolical laugh.
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