thread: Mullocks Return
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05-21-2005, 10:45 AM
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That chapter was interesting-I liked the part where Stranger drank the tea-his reaction was priceless! The only thing I could say is that I noticed a few TINY, little grammar mistakes, but they were hardly noticable this time. Other than that, this chapter was good-keep it going.
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