Thanks, guys.
Kaizer- The thought of sending this idea to Lorne has crossed my mind many times. I will most definately send it, but right now I'm just concentrating on finishing this and hoping to Odd that I don't come into contact with any plotholes.
In fact, I just fixed one plothole in the chapter entitled "Big, Bad Bailey." It's near the bottom, where it now talks about the journey through Canyon Pass. It originally involved Pugsley spotting Stranger, which clashed with the latest chapter where Pugsley catches a glimpse of him and actually confronts him in the forest.
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