Yay! Stranger's alive!
Well,to be honest, that chapter wasn't as good as your last one, but it wasn't a bad one, nonetheless. It was ok, but you still need to bring out the characters' personalities more. For example, you could add a bit to the story to set the mood of the environments and the characters' thoughts and feelings. Where you put: "Not far out in the Stockyards Stranger was running and heard the scream that echoed across the valley.", you could add flavor to it, so to speak, by writing something like: "As Stranger was quickly making his way through the Stockyards, he heard Molluck's furious scream echo across the valley. Stranger knew that Molluck had found out about his escape, and he was very frightened at the thought of Molluck catching him before he could get away. Trying to ease his mind, Stranger focused less on his fears and more on his mission: to escape Rupturefarms." If you could just bring more of you chapters out like this, then the story will be even better. Not a bad chapter, but it could use some improvements.
