There are only a couple of minor things I could point out and those are: 1. The Slig queen's name is 'Skillya', not 'Silkia'.
2. This one is pretty much like your chapter about Maggie getting killed: WHY does Molluck want to kidnap Skillya?
Other than that, the chapter was good-see, I knew you could do it!
You're getting better and better at this.
Keep the story going!