[mudling]

i know how you guys don't like the millions of not good enough stories but i have diceded to write one more becuase in my other stories my chapters were too long, this time they will be short, please give me advice on my story, thanks.

tig looked around nervously it was his first day in the job, he was a mudokon, the weakest one of his kind, and pretty short too. he walked confidently down the corridor and wondered why the sligs held his hands so tight. he was a child, he was doing a cource to see where he should work. he continued walking along, "why is everyone sad?" is one of the many questions he bugged the sligs to answer. he sat on a high, small, rotting stool, when he entered a cold, shiny room, the walls were padded too. once they had stopped asking questions, tig was lead forward, towards a door saying "re-education with dr shrink" in a red paint. then he suddenly siezed by some mudokons, and they didn't look too happy.