Wow, this is the first time I've actually read the faction straight through, reading every line. Before I just scanned it and replied about the characters personalitites. :P
Anyway, I'm awestruck. This is honestly the best fan fiction I've seen on these forums. You go into such detail with each character and what they're feeling, it's amazing. I like how you used a realistic alternative to the unlimited zappflies thing. But yeah, keep up the good work, and I'm anticipating the next chapter. (I mean it this time
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