Wow, I've only just seen this story, and I must say: good stuff, Dipstikk! I don't really look at many fan fictions here anymore, simply because, like you said, most of them either have a not-so-good plot, or are so difficult to understand that you can't even tell what the plot's supposed to be! But now I know that all is not lost, there are still
some writers who can make a good story.
I, too, have a very small amount of posters in my fan fiction, although mine probably isn't that good anyway. Speaking of that, I'd better update it soon...