It's the same way with my fiction. I have about two loyal fans who post once after every chapter. It drives me up a friggin' wall. I spend an hour trying to think out how to develop my characters while keeping the story interesting, yet some 10 year old who types up a chapter before he leaves for school in the morning gets lauded for his writing skills. For shame.
As for your fan fic, you nailed the personalities of Stranger and the Clakkers, along with the Outlaws you created. You know how to develop a character, which is more than I can say for the majority of other fan fiction writers. It practically feels as if I'm reading the script to the second SW!
Well.... not really. But it's the next best thing.
Well.... not really. But it's still damn good.
