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Chapter 9: fire escape.
Oil cans were spilling by the second! (BTW it's a oil factroy.) "We're All gonna die!" Charles screamed. Suddenly a circle of fire surrounded Charles and Chevil! Then, Chevil fainted! "Too, much...heat.uhhh." Chevil moaned. "Chevil! Wake up man!" charles yelled. the fire circle was closing in! It seemed all hope was lost! "Chevil, wake...up," Charles was actually crieing for help! And when the circle was about to hit them, A shaman appeared in the sky! Pushing the fire away leaving Charles enough time to drag Chevil out. the whole factory blew up in a GIGANTIC Explosion! Charles saw it from a nearby hill.
Charles led Chevil to a small stream, and poured water on Chevil's face. "What? What happend?" Chevil asked. "You fainted in the building when it was on fire, a shaman helped me rescue you. You do know what I'm talking about right?" Charles asked. "Yeah, but where am I?" Chevil asked again. "Hehe, welcome, to the Jukabo Tribe." Charles said.
FIN
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