Wow, that was a lot to read! I was a bit worried about how this would turn out because I thought that the first chapter was a bit weak. It just basically said 'this is Smog, he was forced out of his home.' and 'This is Muff. Smog lives with him. His parents were slaves at Rupturefarms.' It gave a bit of background, but not enough, if you know what I mean. But I was surprised because the story picked up a lot after that first paragraph and it ended up having that epic feel that all of your other stories have, which is a good thing.
I really like it and I can't wait to see more!