Those two chapters were good, Sliguy, but I do have one thing that I can point out. I was so excited that I was going to see Slaga in action when he was rescuing the Mudokons. I was thinking I'd see him battle with a few sligs (possibly even big bros), but it was just like "bam, you're all free.". I just think that this part went too fast. Not that it was bad, it was good, it's just that it needs to be a bit more descriptive. I don't want you to get offended, I'm just trying to help.
Overall, it was very good, though.
