This is excellent so far, Drag! There's a real sense of suspense.
My only nitpick is the mixing of tenses:
Her mate had chased after a trespassing male earlier in the day and he hasn't come back sense.
'had' is past, 'hasn't' is present. It sounds weird if they're both in the same sentence.
*runs before the tomatoes arrive*
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