I like it (and i shud for all the waiting I did for it!) Ooh, remaking repturefarms... the plot thickens like jelly!
I strongly recommend as a fellow writer that you come up with a name for the factory yourself. Not doing it makes you seem lazy and if you do that sort of thing it can just get annoying.
I once read this story where the guy wrote something like: "He took a pizza from the fridge. You, the reader, can choose the flavour. Anyway, he put the pizza you have chosen in the microwave. 5 minutes later he removed your pizza and ate it. He liked the flavour you chose..." Basically it went on and on like that for ages. it was without a doubt the worst written thing I have ever come across, which was a shame cus the story itself was pretty good.
Anyway, if you get us to name your factory you're just gonna cause yourself a whole ton of trouble you could definately do without. Exercise some creativity here!
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