[The Big Cheese]

heres my story ive been making

Chapter 1

"hey.....HEY!!! Mikey!!!"
"yeah...what?"
"come look at this new formule i made!"
"yeah yeah ok.."
*mikey walks over to louie*
"ok look at this"
*louie is about to poor the formule on a fuzzle*
*BAM!!! a intern comes flying through the door*
"aghghhh!!!"
*louie drops the formule on mikey*
"ahhhhhhhhhhh louie you fool" aginisenly screams mikey
*mikey runs into the bathroom*
"GOD DAMIT!!!!....WHAT THE HELL DO YOU WANT!!!!* yells louie
*louie points at the shocked intern*
"muahmwomemomema" murmers the intern
"oh fer crine out loud!"
*louie rips out the stiches on the intern*
"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH........" screams the intern
*blood drops from the interns lips*
"oh get over it you baby..."
"eh...ah......hm.....MUDUKONS!!!!!!!!!!!!" the crazed intern screams out

so should i keep on going???