View Single Post
  #35  
05-26-2001, 09:30 AM
Rich's Avatar
Rich
Can't Be Arsed
 
: Apr 2001
: Wolves, UK
: 2,429
Blog Entries: 1
Rep Power: 26
Rich  (138)Rich  (138)

Thanks silver, my overall length of posts should contain more now.
I'm getting the hang of writing in first person.

As they stood around me I glanced at one of my wounds, there was blood everywhere. I wished that the third slig had knocked me out. It didn't matter anymore, I was going to die anyway. "Thank you..." I managed as the slig stood over me. He remained silent, he wasn't even looking at me. Nat and Ash suddenly stepped back in alarm. The slig was shaking, he dropped his gun. A lense in his mask shattered showing a shocked eye. All his veins stood out from his skin, blood dripped from his mouth and finger nails. His neck snapped and his pants broke under him. He fell out of them, squirming around like a fleech, cracks appeared in his skin. We had our eyes fixed on him, he finally stopped in one position. Then he exploded, streams of blood and bones filled the room. His internal organs showered us, nothing remained in his place. "Yuck!" cried Nat wiping goo of his face and body. I wasn't as bad as him, all the parts had flew over my head. I smiled weakly at Nat, although we had not known each other long being a mud he had a large heart. He held my hand, I began to cry, I didn't want to die. Ash also cried, tears bursting through gaps in the stitching. I heard something behind me I turned too see a Mud land on the floor, he looked at us and begn running too us.
__________________
:
What the Fuck is this???Hobo, you make a Shit outta my posts

Reply With Quote