Look Dragadon I don't mean to be mean but urh someone has to tell ya sooner or later.
How can I say this... um... your pictures are'nt very detailed and lack good shading, I think it would be wise to only put up your pictures once you have better artistic talent.
That doesn't mean I don't like your character ideas, they're well thought up, COOL even but still I think you should develop your skills and then show everyone some really good stuff! alright.
I know some character drawing websites, has tutorials and everything.