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Here are the next two chapters. Have fun!
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Chapter 2: A freak is missing!
It was two days after the club meeting, when Snegh met Hykker the vykker at FeeCo Depot. "Hi Hykker! And, do you have all the freaks?" said Snegh. "No boss. We are missing one of them." Said Hykker. "Who?!" asked Snegh. "Years ago, we tried to create another slig queen. The expiriment succeded, but she was escaped, along with some other sligs. We called her Sligra." Said Hykker. "And where is she now?" asked Snegh. "Don"t know boss." Answered Hykker. "Where did those sligs escaped sligs came from?" asked Snegh. "Slig barracks, boss." Said Hykker. "Well, go to slig barracks and talk with the sligs about it, listen to conversations. Maybe you will get a clue..." said Snegh. "Okay boss!" said Hykker.

The next day, Hykker heard something that would change his life. 4 sligs were talking about a place called Muun forest... The sligs were Murck, Morck, Flir and Stan. He heard stories about mudokon terrorists, a shrykull, a native slig tribe and... Queen Sligra! Muun forest! He would never forget that name! He ran (as far as vykkers can run) to a vykker-phone (expirimental communication machine) and called Snegh, who also had a vykker-phone. "I know where she is, boss! Muun forest!" he yelled trough the phone. "Exellent work Hykker!" said Snegh. "Fly to it with your vykker pod, and go get her..."

At the same time at Slig barracks...

"Well, that's the whole story." Said Murck. "Wow! You are really heroes! But... we haven't seen that flying train! And you are not fired for not defeating those mudokons. And where are the others?" Said Stan. "Yeah, general Drippik was bussy with other things, but he said: "One more fault, and you are fired! We have hide the train close by the FeeCo Depot. The others are tranfered to other regions, sadly we had to say goodbye." Said Flir. "You know, Kneth was right!" said Morck. "We live boring lives! They are happy, and we... slaves of the glukkons! We gonna escape tonight! We seek the train and when it becomes day, we will fly away!" The three other sligs accepted. They would go to Muun forest....

Chapter 3: The escape!
It was night at FeeCo Depot. 4 sligs were sneaking trough FeeCo Depot. They were Morck, Murck, Flir (his wings were swaped for pants as punishment when they returned at Slig barracks) and Stan. What they were doing was extremely dangerous. After a while, they find the exit. "There is a door." Said Stan. "Let's go." Around the FeeCo Depot were barren fields, overrun with slurgs, and maybe fleeches... "There it is!" said Flir. He pointed at a big gap. And there was the train. It looked like a normal FeeCo train, but smaller, and with windows and solar panels. They opened the door and entered the train. "Tommorow, we will fly away." Said Morck.

It became morning. The sun came up. And the sligs awoke. "Time to fly." Said Murck. "I hope we will succeed without Marck. He pushed some buttons and the train began to take off and flied away. At the same time, Hykker the vykker was flying away from the FeeCo Depot at top speed. To the Muun forest. A beginning of a new adventure....

TO BE CONTINUED!!!!!!!
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