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03-04-2005, 02:16 PM
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Awww, it sucks that Grunt died because he was one of the coolest characters in the story! It was a nice chapter and the only error that I found that sort of stuck out was this:
"I know who to kill the Guru." He gasped.
It should be "I know HOW to kill the Guru." But it's just a minor error. Other than that, it was a great chapter as usual, BBS.
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