Alright this is the first post of the actual story. YAY!
Oh Before I start. Thanks Pacen for telling me how to spell that, I'm just a natural at bad spelling!
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Capri was siiting at the edge of the river. Her light blue hair blowing in the winds. She couldn't believe it. She was now a Priestess Warrior at 13. The youngest warrior ever. Her friend Rok had been the youngest last month at 14.
"At least now he can't say he's a better fighter than me", she said to herself, as she drew in the soft sand beneath the water.
Suddenly she heard a small russel in the bushes.
"Who's there?!", she cried.
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Well, How is it so far? I know it's not much right now, but I'll try to add a new part every day. Ok thank you!Oh and questions, comments and flames are appreciated!
[ June 01, 2001: Message edited by: Capri ]