i love this. i find it a little difficult to follow what's happening, but that's true of all the best novels. i like the way all of the characters seem to hate each other. it's really well written and characterised. well done! you have the rettick seal of approval!
i've decided to start reading some fics, now that i'm ahead in my writing. yours was the first, mainard!
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