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02-15-2005, 04:39 PM
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Abe16
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: May 2003
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Here we go!


Luke had picked the lock on Jonathon's door. "whoa, what's this?Oh my Odd! He's been trieing to kill me!ahhhhh" luke screamed. "Honey? Luke? what are you doing in here?" The queen asked. "Look! Jonathon's been trieing to kill me! the bolamites, brew, poisen syrup, everything!" Luke cried. "Oh my word! and these all say Jonathon!" Cried the queen. "Honey, I'm ho- what the heck are you doing in my room!" Jonathon screamed. "you wanted to kill me and take the crown for yourself!" luke abused. "he's right." the queen agreed. "alright I did, but who's gonna stop me! *click click* hands up! nobody move or the little demon boy gets it!" Jonathon said threatning them. "huh, oh! just back away so the blood won't get on you!" Luke said trieing to not smirk. "uh, O....kay," so he backed away, and..... CHOMP! A scrab had gotten, loose! "now run mom!" Luke told her. luke took the gun the jonathon had used and shot the scrab several times. "Mark.. my word... when my family..... heres about my death.... you'll pay!....uhhhhh." jonathon said then, died. "Mom, at least we are safe." Luke said. So Luke's mother got married to a sensible man and lived happily, ever after, that is, until Jonathon's brother heard about his death.....
THEEND
I have an awsome idea for the Young Prince 2
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