Its a good story, but you have to focus more on grammar, punctuation, and breaking up the reading. Here's what I mean:
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anyways he is about to sit down, and.....FARRRRRRRTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!"HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!" LOL! the whole class laughs!"Mr. Joey, I believe you did this," said the teach, "ya, okay I did it, " i said, "whooo!Go Joey!" says the class, Okay, so I'm the classclown, and every one respects it, see I've been to the princeipal's office so much, he knows me by heart, but one day, my pranks almost got me expelled to bootcamp!
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That's essentially one sentence. The period is your friend. Also putting a extra space in between each paragraph adds to the readability. Plus, you might want to just stick to one of your fan fictions. You have quite a few by now, don't you?
Sorry if i sound like a jerk, I don't mean to be. I really like your story, but I think it could be way better if you work on grammar and readability. Keep it up!