You sort of left a cliffhanger for that chapter-but a good one! It makes me eager to see what happens to Feeco Depot!
This is a really great story-your writing skills are awesome! I also like how you called the flying slig's helicopters heli-packs. (with the R&C reference!)
It's good to know you draw inspiration for this story. (namely the Guru's fate being so similar to Dr. Nefarious.
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