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02-06-2005, 03:34 PM
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Ok, I just got home, and I'm starting chapter 4.

Chapter 4 - The New Guy

Ugh. Man, I was dizzy. I got up and opened my eyes. Hmm... I was still-

Wait. What the heck? I just opened my eyes! Holy crap, I could see! Yes, yes YES! How did I do that? Where did the stitches go? Thank Odd I could see!

Then I spied something that made my elation evaporate. Something big. Something scary. It was a monster. Luckily, it was sitting in the vat with some sorta force field around it, so it couldn't get me. For now. My thoughts were interuppted by screeching Vykkers.

"Yes! Yes! It worked! It worked!"
"Oh, it's beautiful! My beautiful baby!"
"Group hug!"

At this point the Vykkers all assembled into a disgusting purple hug cluster.

"Finally, it worked."
"Okay, lets make sure it turned out well."
"Ok, fine."
"Alright, here goes: Mudoken DNA."
"Lemme see... yup, check."
"Gabbit DNA from that can of Gabbiar."
"Yup, that's there."
"Fuzzle DNA."
"Yeah, you can see it in the head."
"Hmm, what else... Oh yeah, you got that Steef DNA Doc gave us?"
"Look at those meaty forearms and tell me those aren't a Steef's."
"Alright, then we're done... Oh wait. Is the Ratz DNA in there?"
"Yeah, unfortunately. Look at that tail."
"Oh well. It was almost a complete success then!"
"Yaaayyy! Group hug!"

Again came the purple cluster. Gross.

I wasn't even sure what i had just heard. Did they combine all those things to make a new guy? I wasn;t sure I liked the sound of that. But it was part Mudoken, wasn't it? Maybe I could communiacte with it. I took a glance at the monster and shuddered. It sure didn't LOOK like a Mudoken. But then I saw it look back at me. It's glowing eyes (which it had gotten from the Rat) look scared. That was how it was communicating with me! It wanted me to set it free. I had just discovered the Mud in this thing.

Well, I knew I had to set this thing free.

But now wasn't the time. I had to go back to my station and talk to my friends before we could work something out. This would have to be a group effort. But either way, that little monster was not staying with those Vykkers.

End of Chapter 4.
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