commendably twisted end... though the sudden intro of the vykker was COMPLETELY unexpected. I thought their skin was grayish... hmmm... but things aren't always as they seem are they?
when one gives a critique of another's work, it should never be "I liked it. it was cool"
so I must put this thought out. there has been a lot of slig revolutionary fics out there. I understand why... but I find the phenomenon interesting...
oh well
keep it up man, we're waiting for number twenty seven
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