thread: Under the moons -an Oddworld fan fic.-
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02-02-2005, 06:48 AM
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ok. Umm.... I like the idea of this story, but it could be better if you took more time on describing the things. I'd also like if you were a bit slower on moving to the next event. Take your time. Other then that, yer story's great
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