Thanks for the support, oddchick. I'm trying to make the characters sound as much like they're portrayed in the games as possible.
Anyway, here's the commencement of the second half of chapter one:
Molluck looked around at each of the Vykkers.
"You all know what kind of trouble we'll be in if you don't finish this damn project, don't you? We'll be forced to live in friggin' holes, or even worse, mid-level housing! And if any of you decides to drop out, you're all screwed. But that won't happen, will it?"
"Course not, Molluck."
"We know what we have to do."
"Sure thing."
After that the dirty Gluk walked out. I was scared out of my brain. Molluck? Here? Now? What the heck?!? He was supposed to be a Glukkon crisp! I was so confused. Anyway, me and my buddy 'looked' at one another in horror. We both knew we had to get out. If Molluck was involved, it was bad news.
My bud got freaked and started to run across the rafters to the exit. What an idiot! I knew he was gonna raise a racket, so I tripped him. Bad Move. He hit the rafter face-first.
CLANG!
"Holy crap, what was that?"
"I didn't hear anything."
"It's probably just one a those damn Ratz."
"That's a HUGE Rat then. That was a loud noise."
"Yeah, we'll have that one Mud take care of them. What's his name... Job, yea that's it."
"Yea, whatever. Go call him. He's out in the hall."
Uh-oh.
End of Chapter 1.