thread: Tattoo's and Toe-Suckers [part 1] (Epic of Under-Foot)
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01-31-2005, 05:41 PM
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Not bad, I liked how you worked yourself into the story. However the wittwe kids voice makes the stowy hawd to wead, in my opinion. God job though.
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