Wow...I don't know what to think about that chapter...It's good to know that this story is not going to end like that though. Anyway, that one was very well-written sliguy!
Although I must say that I would like to think that Abe and Munch would panic a bit more if they thought that they were going to die. You saw how much they freaked out in all of the bad endings in the games, right?
Anyway, it was just some constructive criticism- other than that good chapter, sliguy!