As I told you before, your description of the great forest is awesome, and now with the addition of the creatures, it became even better. That was great Rettick! I spent about 15 minutes trying to imagine the apocalyptical devastation caused by an old, dead, two miles long, huge falling tree. The kikkits swarm also made me visualize creppy scenes of a dark cloud of death going up among the trees, killing everything in its path. The brack creature creature is the ultimate proof of that "rule of thumb" you mentioned (the further you go down, the 'weirder' the wildlife).
YOu should expand on this, and write a tale about the Great Forest.
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