i got one:
THE SANCTURY
Deep within a deep forest that was once the home of the great Marakites amidst the great ruins of an ancient mudokon temple lies the sanctury.It is situated in the center of the temple ruins surrounded by great trees and ancient statues, the sanctury is the last refuge of oddworld's rapidly vanishing wildlife.gaurded my mudokon tomahawkers and led by a powerful mudokon shaman.the sanctury is a place of pools of and deep caverns. the sanctury provideds a plac eof shelter for meeps mudflubs meetles fuzzles elums paramites scrabs rats mudokons an even a few native sligs still living naturally. but the greatest secret of the sanctury lies deep beneath the earth, the hatcherys. they lies sprawling out across a thousand caves the hatcherys hold the key to oddworld. hundreds of different kinds of eggs, mudokon eggs, a few lone gabbits eggs and even a clutch of meech eggs the sanctury serves to gaurd these treasures untill the far off day of when oddworld is finally free.
what do ya think i might do another draft but i will post this for now.
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