I'll go read it right away er, just in case you wanted it, the second chapter:
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The egg began to crack more and more as the creature inside pushed on the shell. Suddenly, a claw came out. The
three watching Mudokon’s eyes widened in surprise. Crack! The shell wilted off, showing the creature into the
Oddworld. Abe, Alf, and Bigface stared in orror and awe at what they saw. Why, the egg wasn’t the holder of a
Mudokon after all, in fact is was quite the opposite. “A slig!” Alf yelled. He whacked Abe on the back of the head
“Nice job, Abe. Bringing the killer right to us!” Bigface growled “Alf! He isn’t capable of killing anybody in this
state” The Mudokon simply replied “Then I say we leave him in the forest, let him die naturally” Abe gently picked
him up “Alf! We can’t do that! Maybe if we keep him here, he won’t want to be evil and shoot Mudokons.” Alf
moaned “Abe, look at him. He’s a different color than most Sligs, he’s missing a hand and his eyes are a different
color as well. Besides, I’ve now found out why Glukkons put masks on them!” Abe glared at his friend “We’re
keeping him. We can’t just let him die, we’d be no better than the Glukkons!” Bigface sighed as he watched the two
fight “Silence! We shall keep the Slig, but he’s your responsibility, Abe. But, as Alf requested, we shall dig through
your findings for things he could wear” Abe nodded. Bigface turned to him again “Now, he needs a name....I’ll leave
that up to you Abe” The tattooed Mudokon smiled “Right sir, I have already got a name, his name is Maverick.” Alf
laughed “Maverick! Where’d you get that!?” Abe walked to the exit “Just something I thought of” Then he walked
out
They had found a slig mask in the bags and slipped it on Maverick, this caused alot of Mudokons to look
more at the Black Slig. They also found some pants but it was broken, then they found some helicopter, but that was
broken too. Thaey had no idea how to fix it, but they wanted the slig to be able to walk so the attached the two things
and carfully used their power to support the other. It looked as if it was pants connected to a backpack. The hardest
thing the workshop Mudokons had to do was create a fake, robotic hand for Maverick. It took a long time, but soon
they managed to get it to work and attach it to the sligs arm. Sligs are born at their normal size, so the didn’t need to
make any replacements. When Mudokons watched their young, Abe watched Maverick. He felt sorry for the little
guy because he was different and never around others of his kind. Sadly, he never did find any eggs when he went
back to the ruins. He found some dead newborns, but no eggs. Maverick was often watched by Alf when Abe was
away. Alf hardly payed attention to him, just would give him some tea and walk away. Over the years, Maverick grew
smarter and more independent, but he still knew Abe, his foster dad....
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