[ArtemisP]

Heres my Fan fic! It's called "The One Among us and I'm going to show you guys the first chapter and you tell me what you think ^_^ Here it is:
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A group of Mudokons were rooting through some ruins. Each of them had a large bag and were searching for metal
and robotic peices to help build something for the tribe. One of the Mudokons was Abe, the others were, Smakel,
Raybo, Alf, and Cleer. “Yo Abe, we got our bags full so we’re gonna go.” Smakel said in his squeaky voice. Abe
waved at him “You guys go, I’ll catch of later!” Alf snorted “You want to spend more time here? Forgot it, I’m
gone” He walked off in a huff, the other following close behind. Abe shook his head and chuckled, stuffing different
thing into his rapidly filling sack. After five minutes of rooting through things, he found something strange “An egg!”
He shouted, holding it up to the light. It was a black one, with four blue dots around its top. It was alittle rough but it
was ok. “Wow, I found a Mudokon from the hatchery. Never seen one before! Wait untill the guys see this” He
stuffed a couple more things into his sack and tightened it. Slinging it over his shoulder he picked up the egg and
began to walk back to the Tribe.

Abe arrived at the Camp with a smile on his face. Many of the Mudokons wondered why he was so happy.
He threw his sack into the pile and walked into Bigface’s hut “Bigface! I found this egg when I was looking for the
metal peices!” Abe said, placing the egg on the table. Bigface looked up “Do you know how long before if hatches?”
Abe shook his head “But when he does, I’ll take care of the Mudokon, I really will” Bigface sighed “Alright...” Abe
smiled “You won’t regret it!” Just then Alf walked into the hut “Hey, Abe! The guys n’ me are going to have some
free tea, you coming?” Alf asked. Abe nodded and replied “Yea, I’ll come. Look what I found!” He held out the egg
to Alf, only to hear the Mudokon groan “No, not a little kid! He’ll just be in the way!” Abe growled at Alf “Thats not
true, Alf! you don’t know that” He placed the egg down. Alf glared at Abe “I just know I don’t wand the little
Mudokon here, alright? Just bring it back where it came from” Abe crossed his arms “No, that would be murder!”
While the were fighting, the egg began to move, then he rocked, then it began to jump up and down on the table.
Abe, Alf, and Bigface turned around and looked at the egg as a crack appered in it and it slowed to a hard swaying
motion. Then part of the crack opened... Both Abe and Alf yelled in unison “It’s hatching!”