Thanks for the comments guys. Now it's time for the explanation.
The boy that doesn't exist doesn't exist, but from his point of view he does. It's quite confusing to explain. He doesn't exist to other people but he does to himself. I hope you understood that.
I think I'll make this short story into a longer one. Here are some things I might add to the story:
-The only person that he exists to is a small girl called Amy (I'm still thinking up the reason why),
-He see's many things happening in this city, such as murders, robberies, etc. but he can't stop them or do anything about them,
-The main thing that sticks in his mind is the woman that murdered her husband (the one he follows in the shorter story),
-The ending might have a slight twist to it.
I'll start writing it today.
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