I need feedback for my story SLIGS IN MUUN FOREST! I want to know how it can be better, or what you think of it. I simply need feedback! (Post it on that topic please!)
The link is:
http://www.oddworldian.net/oddworldforums/cgi-bin/ultimatebb.cgi?ubb=get_topic&f=2& t=000165
[ September 08, 2001: Message edited by: Cool Paramite ]