This is very well written! I think you portrayed Molluck very accurately, and you've got some good descriptions in there too (I liked the Slig clenching its face tentacles into a 'fist of disgust'). Just like your earlier narratives, I really felt as though I was watching it unfold; your writing conveys very strong mental pictures. I found myself wincing in sympathy for Akya.
Keep up the good work!
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