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11-18-2004, 05:51 AM
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Presant Day:

It was morning on the vast shore line of Mudos and it was a beautiful sun rise. Flocks of birds chirped and flew their way over the waters of the Great Sea of Oddworld. The riseing mist gave way to white clouds as if the night before it rained gently over the waters. Below the white clouds opened up to the shore line as the sound of surf pounded against sand beachs and rocks. At the same time schools of Gabbits were feasting on their morning brekfest of worry fish and skipping across the blue waters like Dolphens. In the distance the sun shined on the buildings of a small mudokon fishing village and the godly blue waters of Oddworld.

Mudokons were starting to get up and go to their work as small mudokon sail boats were leaving the harbor to harvest worry fish. The fishing village was a small town that only a few hundred mudokons lived in. One paticular mudokon named Zin was just getting up and getting his newspaper "The Daily Deception" He stretched out his legs and arms on a small long chair overlooking the harbor. His friend Kluna was still asleep in the mudokon hut. Zin yelled out "Kluna get your behind up we got work to do!"

Behind him in the hut snoreing was heard and Kluna wasn't paying much attention to his friend Zin. Zin Kept yelling out to him "Get your ass out here now!"

Suddenly Kluna laying down on his hammick woke up so fast that the hammick rolled over and Kluna went falling down to the floor.

"Wa whats going on?" murmured Kluna as he was on the floor half awake. He then proceded to get up only again as being the cluts he is, smacked his head against the bar that was holding up the Hammick. Zin was still yelling out to him, "Kluna would you get out here we have work to do!" Kluna rubbing his head said "I hear you I hear you, geez mann I can't get much sleep around hear with you yelling like that! Old Mud Ram is not going to like this and he will bring it up at the next village meeting! You know how he is with loud noise. He can't stand it. After his fateful accident with the sea rex and what it did to his hearing I don't blame him!"

Zin got out of his chair and began working on his sail boat as he grabbed a tool and turned a small Oddworld style radio on. "I don't care Kluna its morning and we have a lot of work to do and so little time. We need to get our fishing boat sea worthy for Saturday's fishing challenge. The prize for the one to catch the most fish in the shortest amount of time is guaranteed 10 thousand moolah, a year supply of spooce for mudokons who are entering, and plus a chance to become Lead fisher. This is important for me Kluna and I do not want Brufis to win this event. You know how he treats me!" explaned Zin.

Kluna walking out onto the small dock towards Zin mummbled to himself "I know I know!" Suddenly over the radio there was an announcement. "Attention attention this is an important news bulletin and news you can use mudokon terrorist known as Abe who shut down Rupture Farms and destroyed Saul Storm Brewery is now in agreement with the industrialist to a peace treaty between the two worlds. After years of conflict between industrialist and natives peace has finnally come. It is evident that our two cultures must not remember the past and improve on the future. This is your local bulletin signing out! We now return to our regularly scheduled chum!"


"Ah that Abe he shure saved us all. I can't believe we can now live peacefully among industrialist" said Zin. Meanwhile Brufis a fat mudokon approached Kluna and Zin's home and started clapping his hands. "Boys boys boys! you really think you can get that peace of junk to sail? You might aswell give up because Im going to be lead fisher tomarrow not you!" as he pointed his finger at Zin. "The moolah is mine and its my job!" I am loved in this community and you are nothing but weaklings!"

"What do you want Brufis?" replied Zin angerly as he stared right at Brufis.
"Moolah Zin moolah and I am intitled to it!" replied Brufis.

Kluna tapped on Zin's shoulder, "comeon Zin just leave him alone! He is going to lose."

"Wait a minute Brufis your a cheater and you will see us win tomarrow!"

"Oh yeah! if you look to your right you will see my boat." as Brufis pointed towards a huge sail boat that was floating next to there dock. It was a large boat with a crew of ten includeing two sligs and a big bro.

"I hate to tell you me friends that ye has the finast crew of the seven seas of Oddworld. With seven of the best fishing mudokons in the village and two sligs and one big bro we are surely going to win and I will control this village and become lead fisher the most highest status in our lovely town."

Zin was getting more angry with Brufis as Brufis was walking up onto his boat. Zin lashed at him and yelled "and just how you going to to do this?"

Brufis's crew grabbed him before he can do something. He smiled rather annoyingly and said "why with industrial power me friends what else! hehehehe lets go leave these fools with their piece of junk!" Just then the boat took off and everyone of Brufis's crew started laughing. Kluna turned to Zin and said "don't worry about him we will beat him. He is nothing but a gloat."

Zin looking out at the harbor and said "I sure hope so Kluna I sure Hope so! This means a whole lot for me Kluna. To become lead fisher has always been my passion and I just don't want to lose to an old mud like Brufis. You understand right?"

"Of course Zin of course we will win tomarrow!"

"Zin turned to Kluna and said "Tomarrow!"
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