No replies yet!? Come on, I want some input. Oh, well. This is a long story, anyway. Here's Chapter Three.
In the forest, the three were walking. Abe was a little uncertain about Molluck, though. Molluck said, "I found a secret cave that leads to a hidden area, somewhere in between Scrabania and Paramonia." With that, he pulled a curtain of vines aside to reveal a cave entrance. The three stepped inside and followed the winding cave path. When they finally reached the other end, they were in a bright, sunlit area, with several species in one group. "This is the Paradise Plain," Molluck said, "so called for the many species living in harmony. This is a Scrab pack." Neither Abe or Malaya could believe their eyes. A social group of Scrabs! "This," Molluck continued, "is the only Shrykull pack." Once again, Abe was surprised. To think of Shrykulls as real animals wasn't common, but this disproved all the "god" legends. A loud moan came from the trees, just as Malaya said, "What smells?" An Elum herd walked out of the forest. The leader saw Abe and howled. "Elum? Is that you?" Abe asked in surprise. This was the very same Elum that had helped him. Elum grunted in response. Then, two tribes walked into the clearing. But, these weren't Mudokon tribes. One tribe was comprised of native Glukkons, once thought to have vanished. The other, a native Slig tribe, was just as unbelieveable. Molluck said, "We are gathering here to create an army to oppose the 'civilized' Glukkons and Sligs. We were going to ask the Mudokons for help. Can you get the rest of your tribe to help us?" "Yes, I can," Abe replied.
That's the third chapter. Please tell me what you think. I want some input, here.
