sorry i haven't replied yet, i don't know why, but i don't seem to have looked at this for a few days, and suddenly you've got a lot done. anyway, i think this is getting very good. i'm glad you toned down the personalities of the drakkics, particularly Juk. one thing i've only just realised, though: how were Delta and Beta mates when they've always been kept in different cages?
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