Oh and one more thing, this is kind of obvious but I'll say it anyway...Your characters CAN NOT be so powerful that they are a virtral god(in other words, no god-like abilities)
Spider walked over to the river. It was an unusally quiet day and it unsettled him somewhat. He reached into the water and splashed his face. He yelped in surprise at its coldness.
The water is unusally cold today, but how? The tempature was burning hot all yesterday and last night...he thought, and the water was warm too...
He shrugged unknowingly to himself and went to take a drink. He immediately spat the water back out.
What!? The water is stagnet!? How can that be? This is a river! He looked up at the trees and grass around him, he noticed to his surprise that they were starting to turn brown, and it was in the middle of summer. He ran about a bit, and everywhere else it was the same. No birds were singing, no wind, no....life. The realization stuck him like a thunder clap. For some reason...Oddworld was dieing....
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