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08-21-2001, 08:14 PM
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Alector
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: May 2001
: Germany
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Ok, here's the next chapter of this big story:

Chapter2:

Alector and his father take the Scrab and go home. "Father, I never asked you this before…but why do you wear a tiara?" –"Son, I asked the same question to my father as I was once a child like you. You don’t get the tiara from other Mudokons or sacred things. The tiara comes from my heart and grown- the
more you learn, the bigger your tiara will."- "Can I also get a tiara father?" –"Certainly, my son…just wait…" -Alector smiles- "I want to be like you!" -They both walk back into the forest, through the fields and finally to their mountain. The Fencer lays the Scrabs limp body down, takes his spear and disembowels it.
-"Eeeew…father." -Alector closes his eyes-" Alector’s father takes the bowels-"-Son, can you take them and throw them away?-" Alector looks away and takes the big bowels of the Scrab and tosses them down into the little sea under the mountain. –"Oops….uuum father, I gave them to the….the hungry
Fleeches…!"–Where are Fleeches?"- Alector looks down and wipes the blood on
his hands off.

The Fencer looks behind him because he hears a rustling. He stands up and climbs a bit over their lair. "Father, what’s wrong?" –"Pssst !- be quiet."- He hears a quiet snarl.Suddenly a Paramite jumps without warning onto the Fencer’s body and tries to hurt him, but the Fencer squeezes the Paramite on the ground, then another Paramite comes and jumps onto Alector’s fathers back.

Alector takes his fathers weapon, runs to the Paramite and cutts
his head off. Alector falls down because the weapon is too big and has an
extreamly heavy weight. "Father, are you ok??!!"-His father is still pushing the Paramite to the ground. The Paramite dosn’t get air and it suffocates.
Alector looks to his father -"Wow….what where thoughs??" –"Thoughs where Paramites"-
Alector looks down at both dead Paramites, walks around them a bit, touches the leg of one Paramite -"…I’ve never seen Paramites before, you tell me so
much about creatures of this world, will I see them all someday?" –"Not
all, my son…but a lot of them are enemies and friends. "-
The Fencer begins to cough. "Are you alright?" He coughs louder. "Son, I
have an acute pain in my body…" -He closees his eyes and begins to scream as a result of the
pain. Alector holds his father "What’s wrong?? Are you ok??!" –"I’m too
old son…"- Alector holds his fathers hands and looks into his eyes -"No! You…but….you are
so fit and you don’t look that old…and I must learn so much from you…I want to
be a fencer like you someday!!"- Alector’s father coughs a bit again and stands up. "I feel a bit better now…thank you, my son!" -The fencer touches on his head- "I’m getting dizzy" -He quickly sits down and relaxes a bit. "Father, do you feel better now…can I go to the forest and make you a good tea when I
come back?" –"Certainly, my son…I will make food for us"- He smiles and
stands up again.

Alector takes the Fencer’s spear -"Here’s your spear"- and begins to climb
down the mountain. He runs as fast as he can so he can reach the forest quickly. On the mountain is
his father and he tosses the dead Paramites down off the big mountain in an
abyss. After this he holds the long spear and trys to climb higher on the
mountain. It begins to rain and the rocks get slick. Alector’s father gets
dizzy again and slips on the rocks. He dosn’t look at what he’s doing and falls down the cliff, landing on his spear. The long spear pierces the Fencer’s body. "Nooo,
A…Alector…I wanted to teach you more …for your life…"- He tries to get off
of the spear, but he dosn’t have a enough energy...then he close his eyes.
A storm is coming and Alector wants to go home to make his father the tea that
will cure him. He can’t walk any further because it’s a big storm and the rain whips on
his small body. He sits down in the field till the storm has stopped. He
looks around and sees a lot of little creatures who stare back at Alector and the
to the sweet herbs for the tea. "Uuuum…hello, you little creatures." The
creatures begin to jump around and try to attack Alector! He runs through the big
field and falls down, he quickly stands up and runs away.
Then he climbs on the mountain. It’s so hard to climb there…the rocks are
too slick! Alector chooses the other way and goes around the big mountain (it
takes a bit till he is finally on the other site of the mountain) .
He tyies to climb on the rocks and mud falls on his head. He’s now on the lair where
they both live. Alector runs around the place, searching for his father, but
he can’t find him. The rain stops. Alector looks upstairs and sees a bit of
the tiara of the Fencer "Father?" Alector climbs higher to the place where
his father is- "Maybe he sleeps…but it’s strange, he must sleep in the lair
and not in the rain"- Alector stands up after the hard climbing and looks at his
feet and hands.
They are red – "Is it the blood of the Scrab?"- Alector looks to the body in
the fog. He goes to the near of it and he can’t believe what he sees.

It’s his father, dead on the spear "Noooo!!!, don’t do this!" -He begins to
cry and shakes his father "No!!! That was my mistake! I went away from you
and left you alone!" -Alector shakes his father faster- "You can’t!!! You
can’t leave me alone in this world!!!"- He cries louder and begins to
tremble with fear. He reminds himself of what his father said a
long time ago: "When I should die, my son, take the tiara from my head away.
Don’t forget that!".
Alector sits down to his father and stares at him. He can’t see him so
good, his eyes are filled with tears. Alector gives his father a kiss on the
head and takes the tiara away. He holds his father till he disappears in a blinding
glare.

-"That’s not fair…you wanted to show me this world…" -Alector holds the
glare in his hands…but there is now a warm heat on his arms and hands.
"What’s going on here?" -
From the glare comes a lot of bolts, and it burns something into Alector’s eyes.
He screams from the pain, but he can’t move. The glare disappears in the air and
the heaven gets blue. Alector holds his hands on the eyes – "They are hot….I
have pain. What’s wrong with my eyes?" -Alector opens his eyes and goes to a
little hole what is filled with water. He sees big Scrars on his eyes. – "I
can’t believe it, I have such a kind of tattoos like my father on my eyes-"...
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