[Alector]

yO, i started to write a little fanfiction this week, i hope you like it!

Chapter 1:

A new day begins on the big Land and the golden sun rises over the mountains,
where a blue-skinned Mudokon watches over a forest. It's a Fencer, a fencer who
protects his world and believes in himself. The Fencer looks around the
mountain and calls too someone…: "Alector, come with me. We'll go hunting."-
a little boy jumps up to the big Fencer.
"Look, my son…do you see, the sun is rising?"
"Yes, father…it's great!"
" I want you to learn…to learn what I do, and learn to
believe in yourself!"
Alector looks at his father without saying a word. -" C'mon, we'll go watch
the Big Scrab herd!". The Fencer and Alector climbed down the mountain and
walked across a big field where little creatures sleep and live. "Can you
hear the sounds of the creatures…they sing and they scream." Suddenly Alector hears
a loud but quiet scream- "Did you hear that?" - "No, what did you hear?"
"Is this the creature you told me? The creature who has no feelings and no
face?"-
"I hope that we never meet this creature!" They both walk into the forest.
"Son, do you see that tree, it's one of the biggest tree of its kind on this world."
Alector dosn't look at the tree, instead he looks behind him and suddenly becomes
nervous.-"Son, what's wrong with you?" -"Nothing…I'm alright."

Alector and his father walked through the forest. Then alittle creature
jumps onto Alector and bites him in his ear.-"FATHER, WHAT'S THIS?!"-
Alector takes the creature and tosses it to the ground. His father sees the
'animal' and prepares to spear it! Then the little creature jumped a few steps back-
"I'm new here…my name is Electra, I wanted to hike across this
world…but…who are you?"-
The Fencer puts his spear away -" Are you one of our enemies?" Electra
looks at the Fencer and Alector -" I don't know." -Then he jumps away.
Alector stares at the Slig and shakes the head-"Father, was this a Slig…the
creature who can't talk?" His father close the eyes-"Yes, but no…he has
legs. Perhaps he'll be dangerous for us. He'll be a big Creature!"
-"Yes, can we continue our 'walking tour, father?" -
The Fencer begins to run…-"wait!"- Alector tries to run up with his father, but
he gets faster and faster -"Please wait!"- Alector can't see his father
now…-"Father????. Where are you???… HELLO?!"- Alector just hears his father calling far in the distance.
-"Alector! Come on, come and look what I have found here!"- Alector follows his fathers voice and runs to it.
He finally reaches the base of a little mountain, climbs to his father, and can't becomes astonished as he can't believe what he sees.

That's the biggest Scrab heard I have ever seen! -"Will it be dangerous when I run into
the heard?"-His father takes his weapon out, and stands up -"Yes!"- And runs into
the Scrab heard.-"What are you doing?!!"- The fencer runs to the heard of Scrabs, and
jumps onto one of them, then quiclky runs away and makes them confused. But some of the Scrabs see him and run to the
Fencer and try to attack him, but he's too fast. He tries to make the Scrabs
confused- so, that the Scrab heard runs to an other place and forgets the
Fencer…but the least dominat of the Scrabs will be there, still confused and this Scrab will be killed by
Alector.
The Fencer quickly runs back to the Scrab heard again. The Scrabs are so confused by his actions that they
run away without even thinking about protecting the other in their heard.
The least dominate Scrab is now alone and waits till the Fencer comes closer.
He attacks the Scrab quickly before it can attack him. Alector's father takes the
Scrab and holds it on the neck and on one leg- "Alector, take my spear and
come here!" -. But Alector dosn't know what his father wants him to do-"Ok"- he runs up to his
father whal he struggles with the Scrab. -"Alector, I want you to kill the Scrab!"-
-"What?!, I can't!" The Fencer looks at the Scrab -"Alector, this is the least dominate of the
Scrabs in the whole heard…and I want you to learn how to hunt and how to kill like a true Fencer so you can hunt your own food, when I should die!"-
Alector thinks about what his father just said, then glances to the Scrab, takes the
spear in the right position and thrusts the spear into the Scrabs thick body. The
Scrab screams and tries to kick them both. Alectors father holds the Scrab
down and snaps its neck -"You speared it wrong." -
"You'll learn to fight, my son. You will be a Fencer-"Alector smiles -"Yes!
I will!"

[ August 22, 2001: Message edited by: Alector ]