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06-19-2004, 05:44 AM
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ANN NEELY
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: Dec 2002
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Oddworld BOING!

I'm going to be a teacher or a computer graphics designer.
Anyways, here's another comic. This one has Rachael in it, who is a human that was raised by native mudokons. And Jirachi, which Racael made while she was messing around with science. (Kind of weird ideas, huh?)
Subtitles:
Panel 1: Rachael- There, Jirachi. Now you look splendid! Jirachi-Jiraa!
Panel 2: Rachael- That bow really suits you. I never imagined that you could be cuter!
Panel 3: Craig-Is that thing all you care about? You have a job to do, and that job is freeing slaves like the rest of us. Sometimes I wonder if you really ARE a savior.
Panel 4: Rachael-Jirachi is young, she needs attention and care.
Panel 5: Rachael- At least Jirachi doesn't nag me.
Panel 6: Craig- Stupid Jirachi. I wish that thing would disappear or more preferrably, Die!
Panel 7: Little does Craig realize, his wish is about to become very TRUE!
This is a start for a comic book when Jirachi disappears after a she blows up a boiler using Doom Desire. All they find of Jirachi is her ribbon. And needless to say, Rachael is heartbroken.
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