...wow. Thats pretty cool. Thats how I wanted my fan fic to be at first, y'know, just the one chapter kinda thing, with cliffhangers, but then I decided that my first chapter did not explain enough and I decided to write what happened to Eba. But yours works really well, just like that. I hope to add more description when I re-draft mine, because when I write them at first I'm just so desperate to get all my ideas down before I forget them that I miss out bits.
Well done.
I hope to hear about the other fanfic soon
