[Lantra]

okay i posted the beginging of this fanfic a long time ago but i nver finished it so i am writing it again.

Chapter 1
the gentle calls of the gabbit pod echoed throughout the water, their melodious voices mingling together to form a perfect harmony. Satamire Lur swam happily amidst his pod singing with the rest of them and (like most young gabiits) showing off. He peformed agile and daring acrobatics much to the amusement of his elders( for his tricks were quite basic and required little skill). One of the lead gabbits gave a call, he had spotted a school of Worry fish. immediatly the pod swam after them and happily gorged themselves on the fish(who by this time had gone from worried to totally petrified). after only a few the moments of glutony the gabbits left the now decimated school to continue on its way. Satamire however was not so willing to leave the school be, and despite the calls form his elders he swam after the school at top speed. after about ten minutes of chasing the worry fish(who were faster then they looked) Satamire decided to swim back to his pod. he turned and gasped with horror. he saw his pod being swept up in a great web, they sreamed and sung in totall despair and fright, and before Satamire knew what was happening they had been carried off up out of the water and Satamire was all alone.

(more to come soon)