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Oddworld The World of Oddworld - Fan fic story

Welcome to the introduction to The World of Oddworld! Im taking the heavy task to convert the story from the oddworld quintoligy games to a tekst story with some additional things added ofcourse.

Keep in mind before reading:
Im not English, Im Dutch so there may be some grammer errors.
I don't have a lot of internet time on my hands so there will be a few days between chapters.

Chapter 1 - Introduction

Somewhere on the planet of Oddworld, somewhere south in Modo's lies a huge factory. A factory with tons of pipe lines, smoke stacks and endless corridors. A huge stockyard with wildlife surrounding it. Being one of the four structures on Oddworld that an be seen from outerspace, Rupture Farms is believed to be the biggest meet proccesing plant on Oddworld.
Inside are working 100 modukon slaves, captured as natives and put to work by the evil Magog Cartel. Pulling levers, cleaning bathrooms, transforming creatures of the wild into teasty treats and cleaning up blood from those half beaten to death by slig security forces guarding the plant.
The enslaved mudokons have no other choice the just to work as a camera or a slig is always near.
Sleep, eat, work, sleep is the ever lasting cycle of an enslaved mud. For some variation you might get lucky if your beat up and get to rest on the health section. On the other hand, they might just as easely kill you.
Deep in the factory in a room only lightend by some orange lights in the floor powerd by the nly generator still working, is a lonely mud. A blue skinned mud and also the verry last one being present in the plant as we speak.
His name is Abe, promoted to waxing the CEO corridors without guarding. Now he hangs there all alone, his wrists tied up to ropes in the ceiling standing in a strange circler platform.
On the wall he reads things like: Molluck sucks! **** Rupture Farms! Rather dead then a slave!
He came to realize he was in death row... and was just a few minutes away to standing face to face with his boss: Molluck, the Glukkon.
While thinking back to that dreadfull night three days ago when he first started out his new job.

He was happy, he was waxing the floors just outside the CEO confrence room! And best of all, he had no slig guards around to beat him up. Completing a full month of not having beat made him a trustfull and loyal mud. Getting him the promotion every slave at Rupture Farms dreams about. Besides, the sligs felt relieved as well. They handle a gun much better then a mob.
While mumbeling and pushing the waxer Abe looked at the posters of the three man products thay made at the factory. Scar Cakes, Paramite Pies... meech munchies came to extinction, unfortunatly. He shook his head in grief.
Suddenly his eye cought attention to a new add, one he never saw before.

SOMETHING NEW AND TASTY! COMING SOON!

Abe was confused. A new kind of meat? Where would they get that from? Did they discover a new species in this area? He did'nt think so. Although he know Oddworld had way more spiecies then just Mudokons, sligs, slogs, Glukkons, scrabs and Paramites. But all those other species did not live close enough to Rupture Farms to be used as a meat host.
While watching the add he suddenly stood in the shadows of a stroke of light. Coming from straigt behind him. It was the door to the confrence room, it was opend just enough to see what was happaning.
Abe shifferd, he would want to take a peek. But if he got cought... that would be a disaster! They probably wont let him get away with just 50 beat ups. They also won't but hm back in his old position of cleaning the stockyards for scrab poo. They would most likely have him shot.
But dispite that, he took a look anyway.
Inside he saw Molluck, and he scared when he saw two other gluks just a few fet away from him on both sides of the door. Luckely they did'nt see him as they where watching the presentation of Molluck.
Abe watched along with them.
On the big screen accros from the door Abe saw the saiiling records from the scrab cakes and the Paramite pies. They where falling to an abnormal depth becouse of the close extinction of the animals.
The other gluks started to react to it.
'Here ya go!' said one, a few platforms away from the door.
'He did it!' said another next to him.
Another closed his eyes and shook his head.
'Oh no, we're going down...'
A glukkon on the far right in a green outfit with spikkes stikking out of his neck was the only one daring to confront Molluck with the disaster.
'Oh my god Mullock! What are ya doin huh?!'
Molluck turned around, for a minute there Abe thought he would see him and looked for cover.
'Watch,' Molluck said then talked to the slig next to him, 'show em.'
A new chart apearded on the big screen. With flashing colours and a sales record going trough the roof.
'But how!' the green gluk yelled. The screen changed again and at that moment Abe almost had a heart attack. The new meat! It where mudokons!
The gluks started laughing, being happy with the sollution to the problem. Meanwhile Abe was backing up looking around if he saw a slig that happand to be wandering around. He did'nt have to think twice before knowing he had to get out a there.
When he was sure the coust was clear he made a run for it, knowing the corridors. He made a run for the stockyards, knowing that was the only escape route there was.
But what Abe did'nt know was that the CEO door is guarded, not by sligs, but by a camera. And when he spotted Abe, all add's turned into a wanted poster with Abe on it. On top of that, it did'nt took loong for a slig to get in hot pursuit of him.

Last edited by Havoc; 03-17-2004 at 05:10 AM.. : Title Change
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